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After Faz has been kidnapped from Cahuly’s gang, her three-brother headed to Jakarta to search for her with the help of Zehan. But Zsa Zsa, the right-hand of Bern, arrives with his team of thugs: With a mission to capture Zehan and Steve’s sons. Meanwhile, Bern sets to end Steve who still alive in Bangkok. Faz’s two brothers are still in confusion on this mystery puzzle of why their family is being hunted by Chauly’s gang. What is the connection between Steve’s to Cahuly’s gang?

  

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I have highlighted the text with errors. After Faz has been kidnapped from Cahuly’s gang, her three-brother headed to Jakarta to search for her with the help of Zehan. But Zsa Zsa, the right-hand of Bern, arrives with his team of thug s: W ith a mission to capture Zehan and Steve’s sons.

  • I have highlighted the text with errors.
  • After Faz has been kidnapped from Cahuly’s gang, her three-brother headed to Jakarta to search for her with the help of Zehan.
  • But Zsa Zsa, the right-hand of Bern, arrives with his team of thug s: W ith a mission to capture Zehan and Steve’s sons.
  • Meanwhile, Bern sets to end Steve who still alive in Bangkok.
  • Faz’s two brothers are still in confusion on this mystery puzzle of why their family is being hunted by Chauly’s gang.
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After Faz has been kidnapped from Cahuly’s gang, her three-brother headed to Jakarta to search for her with the help of Zehan. But Zsa Zsa, the right-hand of Bern, arrives with his team of thugs: With a

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