The first paraphrase isn't very natural. The second one is entirely unnatural.
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BarbaraPAThe first paraphrase isn't very natural. The second one is entirely unnatural.Hi,
AlpheccaStarsBefore lunch.Hi Alphecca
Tenacious LearnerThen, is there a natural one?There's nothing wrong with the original. Why change it?