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Nikitus Posted 9 years ago
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After a long time, Mark opened the main entrance of the theater

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"After a long time, Mark opened the main entrance of the theater with the key he had in his pocket.

In the other side of the theater, Kelly, Brittany and Lucy tried to help Kevin but the structure was still too heavy for all ofthem. The scaffold started to collapse. Suddenly Kevin saw Kim, Amy, Mike and Sonny showed up. They helped Kevin to scape from him the scaffold."

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After a long time, Mark opened the main entrance door of the theater with the key he had in his pocket. In the other side of the theater, Kelly, Brittany and Lucy tried to help Kev in, but the structure was still too heavy for all o f t hem. The scaffold started to collapse.

  • After a long time, Mark opened the main entrance door of the theater with the key he had in his pocket.
  • In the other side of the theater, Kelly, Brittany and Lucy tried to help Kev in, but the structure was still too heavy for all o f t hem.
  • The scaffold started to collapse.
  • Suddenl y, Kevin saw Kim, Amy, Mike and Sonny sh ow ed up.
  • They helped Kevin to break free scape from him the scaffold.
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After a long time, Mark opened the main entrance door of the theater with the key he had in his pocket.

In the other side of the theater, Kelly, Brittany and Lucy tried to help Kevin, but the structure was still too heavy for all of them. The scaffold started to collapse. Suddenly, Kevin saw Kim, Amy, Mike and Sonny show ed up. They helped Kev

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