After a hard meeting between two persons, with their only relationship
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Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"After a hard meeting between two persons, with their only relationship was went to the same high school, and also big differences related to a particular subject, Kelly decided to decided to have a more direct strategy with Tim, because all the small talk failed, since Tim only responded with monosyllables and an attitude of tiredness."
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" The sentence is too long and difficult to follow. It has many flaws of logic. Please start with writing short sentences.
- " The sentence is too long and difficult to follow.
- It has many flaws of logic.
- Please start with writing short sentences.
- After you have the logic set down on paper, you can join the sentences in a logical order.
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"After a hard (wrong word) meeting between two persons, with their only relationship was (missing words) went to the same high school, and (conflicts with "only") also big differences (That does not go with"relationship")
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