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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

African American

We have paid our dues and I for one an AFrican American am willing to die for this country, so I joined the military and if we had a war today against any country I'd be willing to sacrifice my life for the pursuit of liberty, freedom and justice for all.

Please proofread short paragraph for me.

Much appreciated!
  

Top answer

Hi, You should divide this into two sentences. It would be much better. Want to try?

— Clive

  • Hi, You should divide this into two sentences.
  • It would be much better.
  • Want to try?
  • Clive
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Hi,

You should divide this into two sentences. It would be much better.

Want to try?

Clive
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CliveHi,You should divide this into two sentences. It would be much better.Want to try? Clive
We have paid our dues, and I for one, an African American am willing to die for this country, so I joined the military. If we had a war today against any country I'd be willing to sacrifice my life for the pursuit of liberty, freedom and justice for all.

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Hi,

We have paid our dues, and I for one, an African American, comma am willing to die for this country, so I joined the military. If we had a war today against any country, comma
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