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User_gary Posted 16 years ago
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Afraid of cockroach, pass by dogs
She is afraid of cockroach. She will yell like hell if you throw a cockroach at her.
I'm afraid of small insects and worms too. I don't like holding them in my hand.
The worms wrigling down the floor.
I'm afraid of dog and I don't like to pass by where dogs are there.
Please correct my sentences and suggest better versions too. Thank you.
I'm afraid of small insects and worms too. I don't like holding them in my hand.
The worms wrigling down the floor.
I'm afraid of dog and I don't like to pass by where dogs are there.
Please correct my sentences and suggest better versions too. Thank you.
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I have underlined some problem areas: She is afraid of cockroach . She will yell like **** if you throw a cockroach at her. I 'm afraid of small insects and worms too.
- I have underlined some problem areas: She is afraid of cockroach .
- She will yell like **** if you throw a cockroach at her.
- I 'm afraid of small insects and worms too.
- I don 't like holding them in my hand.
- The worms wrigling down the floor .
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I have underlined some problem areas:
She is afraid of cockroach. She will yell like **** if you throw a cockroach at her. I'm afraid of small insects and worms too. I don't like holding them in my hand. The worms wrigling down the floor.
I'm afraid of
She is afraid of cockroach. She will yell like **** if you throw a cockroach at her. I'm afraid of small insects and worms too. I don't like holding them in my hand. The worms wrigling down the floor.
I'm afraid of
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Thank you Mister Micawber.
Here is my try again :
She is afraid of Cockroach. She will yell like **** if you throw a Cockroach at her. I'm afraid of small insects and worms too. I don't like holding them in my hand. The worms wriggling down the floor. I'm afraid of Dog and I don
Here is my try again :
She is afraid of Cockroach. She will yell like **** if you throw a Cockroach at her. I'm afraid of small insects and worms too. I don't like holding them in my hand. The worms wriggling down the floor. I'm afraid of Dog and I don
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I have underlined some errors again, Gary:
She is afraid of Cockroach. She will yell like **** if you throw a Cockroach at her. I'm afraid of small insects and worms too. I don't like holding them in my hand. The worms wriggling down the floor (This is not a sentence). I
She is afraid of Cockroach. She will yell like **** if you throw a Cockroach at her. I'm afraid of small insects and worms too. I don't like holding them in my hand. The worms wriggling down the floor (This is not a sentence). I
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Thanks again. Here is my try
She is afraid of a Cockroach. She will shout like **** if you throw it at her. I'm afraid of small insectors and worms too. I don't like to garb it in my hand. The worms were wriggling down the floor. I'm afraid of a Dog and I don
She is afraid of a Cockroach. She will shout like **** if you throw it at her. I'm afraid of small insectors and worms too. I don't like to garb it in my hand. The worms were wriggling down the floor. I'm afraid of a Dog and I don
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She is afraid of cockroaches. She will shout like **** if you throw one at her. I'm afraid of small insects and worms too. I don't like to hold one in my hand. The worms were wriggling down on the floor. I'm afraid of dogs and I don't like to pass by where dogs are present.
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