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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Affects other staffs productivity or staff's productivity?
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Action will be taken against further abuse as it causes performance degradation of the email server and affects other staffs productivity.
Action will be taken against further abuse as it causes performance degradation of the email server and affects other staffs productivity.
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I don't get the "other" part. A different staff? Or it affects the productivity in another way?
- I don't get the "other" part.
- A different staff?
- Or it affects the productivity in another way?
- This is what I would write, keeping it as close to your version as possible.
- Action will be taken against further abuse as it causes performance degradation of the email server and affects the productivity of the staff .
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I don't get the "other" part. A different staff? Or it affects the productivity in another way?
This is what I would write, keeping it as close to your version as possible.
Action will be taken against further abuse as it causes performance degradation of the email server and affects the productivity of the staff.
CJ
This is what I would write, keeping it as close to your version as possible.
Action will be taken against further abuse as it causes performance degradation of the email server and affects the productivity of the staff.
CJ
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