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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
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Could you please tell me how to grammatically say this sentence? I had to translate it from french to english and the sentence I got in a sci fi movie.
1 The gravity shift that occurs in the dream will affect the dream within the dream. For gravity shift to affect layer 2 it has to occur in layer 1. But layer 3 can be affected by the gravity shift only if it has occurred in layer 2 and not in layer 1 of the dream.
Thank you
1 The gravity shift that occurs in the dream will affect the dream within the dream. For gravity shift to affect layer 2 it has to occur in layer 1. But layer 3 can be affected by the gravity shift only if it has occurred in layer 2 and not in layer 1 of the dream.
Thank you
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alc24 15 hr 31 min ago [More info] The gravity shift that occurs in the dream will affect the dream within the dream. For the gravity shift to affect layer 2, it has to occur in layer 1. But, layer 3 can be affected by the gravity shift only if it has occurred in layer 2 and not in layer 1 of the dream.
- alc24 15 hr 31 min ago [More info] The gravity shift that occurs in the dream will affect the dream within the dream.
- For the gravity shift to affect layer 2, it has to occur in layer 1.
- But, layer 3 can be affected by the gravity shift only if it has occurred in layer 2 and not in layer 1 of the dream.
- You did a great job on this!
- I added 2 commas and "the" in the second sentence, but other than that, it was fine.
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alc24 15 hr 31 min ago [More info] The gravity shift that occurs in the dream will affect the dream within the dream. For the gravity shift to affect layer 2, it has to occur in layer 1. But, layer 3 can be affected by | ||
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