advise on text for a booklet (about multimedia)

Hello!
Maybe this is not the most appropriate place for posting this subject, but I somehow haven't found any better option...
I"ve composed this text for a booklet, but am not sure about the grammar, and it also lacks some language "roundness" to my taste. Maybe you could take a look at it and give me some advise?
Thank you!
Lentochka

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Panoramic 360º images, also known as 3D or immersive photography nowadays is one of the most attractive and interactive ways of presenting places. Watching panorama, visitor gets “into” a place and is able to look around in all directions just like in reality.

While panorama gives a great general impression of a place, “classical” photographs can highlight details and add mood. This combination lets creating a more objective image of a place, also significantly enhancing the amount of presented information and enriching visitor’s impressions. Together these two formats make a basis of a virtual tour.

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Virtual tours is a new and efficient presentation tool that allows demonstrating real places in the virtual space – be it a country, city, national park, museum, resort, production etc.

In contrast to already widespread media formats – photo albums, postcards, films etc., virtual tours offer an interactive way of exploring places – thanks to panoramic images visitors are “immersed” into a place, as well as able to choose their own sequence of viewing places, viewing points and any other additional information – photographs, texts, sounds, video or 3D animation.