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COUME Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Advice/comments about my personal profile (C.V.)

0 Hello,02br
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00I'm in my final tweaking of my C.V. and I am quite satisfied with my personal profile - except with the first sentence may be - but I would like to get outsides comments/advice and a quick check about the typo, and punctuation.01blockquote
00My profile is based on 11b10international b2b marketing12b10 and 11b10sales12b10, which enabled me to acquire excellent oral and written communication skills. Being goal driven, self-motivated and hard working, 10I10 am able to work in a fast-paced and demanding environment. In addition, my proactive attitude enabled me to take on new responsibilities and to develop my organisational and team working skills.12br
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10I tried to use only active and positive words to make sure that this first paragraph in my C.V. will catch the recruiter attention Do you think I manage to do so?02br
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00If you have any comments/advice they will be more than welcome and if you spotted a mistake make sure tolet me know 05002br
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00Cheers,02br
00Ludo010id5
  

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V. 11blockquote 10My profile is based on 21b 20international b2b marketing22b 20 and 21b 20sales22b 20, which enabled me to acquire excellent oral and written communication skills. Being goal driven, self-motivated and hard working, 20I20 am able to work in a fast-paced and demanding environment.

— Lazarus

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  • 11blockquote 10My profile is based on 21b 20international b2b marketing22b 20 and 21b 20sales22b 20, which enabled me to acquire excellent oral and written communication skills.
  • Being goal driven, self-motivated and hard working, 20I20 am able to work in a fast-paced and demanding environment.
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  • 12br 12br 10If you have any comments/advice they will be more than welcome and if you spotted a mistake make sure tolet me know 15012br 12br 10Cheers,12br 10Ludo12br 12blockquote 12br 00 Ludo--02br 00 The thing that jumps out at me is your tense shifts.
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