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Ofrienfdragon Posted 19 years ago
I know it is just a pile of nonsensical words, and it comes literally from Chinese. But a beginner will always write in such a way, could you give me some advice on how to avoid writing so ? If a beginner don't keep on writing (even if things like the above stuff), how can they develop their writing ability?
Thank you very much.
BTW, I would appreciate it very much more if you could rewrite the above-quoted paragraph.for me
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advice on how to avoid writing nonsensical words
As the sky stars, beautiful and splendid; As the early morning florets, fresh colors. Autumn wind will give you my blessing, happiness and joy are forever willing to accompany you, to make you enjoy the National Day holiday!Hi, teachers:
I know it is just a pile of nonsensical words, and it comes literally from Chinese. But a beginner will always write in such a way, could you give me some advice on how to avoid writing so ? If a beginner don't keep on writing (even if things like the above stuff), how can they develop their writing ability?
Thank you very much.
BTW, I would appreciate it very much more if you could rewrite the above-quoted paragraph.for me
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The second part is okay - it sounds like poetry. The first part doesn't have verbs. Just as the sky if full of beautiful and splended stars, and just and the day dawns with color, I hope the the autumn wind will give you my blessing.
- The second part is okay - it sounds like poetry.
- The first part doesn't have verbs.
- Just as the sky if full of beautiful and splended stars, and just and the day dawns with color, I hope the the autumn wind will give you my blessing.
- I wish you happiness and joy forever, and a happy [name of holiday].
- It's still not very logical, but it creates beautiful images.
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The second part is okay - it sounds like poetry.
The first part doesn't have verbs. Just as the sky if full of beautiful and splended stars, and just and the day dawns with color, I hope the the autumn wind will give you my blessing. I wish you happiness and joy forever, and a happy [name of holiday]. It's still not very logical, but it creates beautiful images.
The first part doesn't have verbs. Just as the sky if full of beautiful and splended stars, and just and the day dawns with color, I hope the the autumn wind will give you my blessing. I wish you happiness and joy forever, and a happy [name of holiday]. It's still not very logical, but it creates beautiful images.
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