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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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advice needed
0 On the way to Marry's, as I walked to my car, I looked back and saw my dog already awake and watching me. 02 br
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00 Is the construction natural and grammatically correct or should it be split into two sentences or rephrased? Thanks in advance! 0-
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00 Is the construction natural and grammatically correct or should it be split into two sentences or rephrased? Thanks in advance! 0-
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01 i 00 On the way to 01 b 00 Mary's 02 b 00 , as I 01 b 00 was walking 02 b 00 to my car, I looked back and saw my dog already awake and watching me. 02 br
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00 I'd do this: 02 br
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01 i 00 On the way to 01 b 00 Mary's 02 b 00 , as I 01 b 00 was walking 02 b 00 to my car, I looked back and saw my dog already awake and watching me. 02 br
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0 Mary's (one 01 b 00 r 02 b 00 ). 05 0 02 br
00 I'd split it. The way it's written makes it sound like you were walking to your car on the way to Mary's, which makes no sense! 02 br
00 Perhaps you could include more information about going to Mary's in the first sentence, just so it's not excessively short: 02 br
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00 I'd split it. The way it's written makes it sound like you were walking to your car on the way to Mary's, which makes no sense! 02 br
00 Perhaps you could include more information about going to Mary's in the first sentence, just so it's not excessively short: 02 br
01 i 00 Just yesterday I d
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