Adverb/Verb request?
Things are flying across the room as Phil is in the midst of a rampage, trashing the office.
1) Is the sentence OK?
2) "Trashing" sounds a bit weak after "rampage". So I was thinking of placing an adverb before it or and maybe using another and stronger verb like "wrecking" or "destroying" instead. What could work in the sentence?
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anonymous 1) Is the sentence OK? Yes, just OK. "As" sounds like you spliced the sentence together with it like duck tape.
- anonymous 1) Is the sentence OK?
- Yes, just OK.
- "As" sounds like you spliced the sentence together with it like duck tape.
- Don't be afraid to write several short sentences when you want pace.
- anonymous 2) "Trashing" sounds a bit weak after "rampage".
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anonymous1) Is the sentence OK?
Yes, just OK. "As" sounds like you spliced the sentence together with it like duck tape. Don't be afraid to write several short sentences when you want pace.
anonymous2) "Trashing" sounds a bit weak after "rampage".
It depends on the tone of the rest of the piece. "Trash" is slangy,
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