I will be extremely thankful for your help with the following superfluous (as usual with me these days) text. What I'd like you to focus on, among other things, is the use of adverbs in the second half of the snippet.
Could somebody possible suggest some improvements? If you come across any other mistakes, I'll be grateful for your correction too.
"... Professional Hardware Support
The implementation of the [product name] in a firm is closely connected with the hardware equipment available to the company as well as its readiness for this important change. The Solution Division of [company name] will solve your requirements for comprehensive management of your hardware device swiftly, effectively and as financially advantageously as possible. We will design a tailored project of hardware equipment at an optimal price to performance ratio. We are ready to deliver high-quality hardware equipment of leading world brands, or build powerful custom solutions. ..."
Many thanks! :-)
Best,
P.
P.S.: Is optimum price to performance ratio better than optimal price to performance ratio, or the other way around?
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