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Sarunnio Posted 18 years ago
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Adverb clause of result

0Is my sentence grammatically correct? Any correction would be appreciated.02br
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00Most of existing players in the market are so small and still have limit size of their customer base that can make no difference in term of service and pricing among competitors.02br
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00I would like to mean "market is quite small and have limit size of their customer base. Therefore, they can make no difference in term of service and pricing".02br
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0You have a 01b 00major02b 00 problem in clarity. g. if the limited size of the customer base refers to the market 01b 00or02b 00 to the individual competitors.

  • 0You have a 01b 00major02b 00 problem in clarity.
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  • if the limited size of the customer base refers to the market 01b 00or02b 00 to the individual competitors.
  • You don't separate well between properties assigned to each.
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0You have a 01b00major02b00 problem in clarity. I've read even your explanations and still can't quite make sense of your stuff ...02br
00I'm not sure e.g. if the limited size of the customer base refers to the market 01b00or02b00 to the individual competitors. You don't separate well between properties assigned to each. 02br
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0Hi,02br
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01font00Is my sentence grammatically correct? Any correction would be appreciated.02font02br
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01font00Most of existing players in the market are so small and still have limit size of their customer base that can make no difference in term of service and pricing among competito
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0Here is the best way to express your thought:02br
00Most (of) existing players in the market are so small and still have 01b00such a 02b00limit01b00ed02b00 (size of their) customer base that 01b00they (02b00can) make no difference in term01b00s02b00 of service and pricing among competitors.0

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