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Namsteven Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Adventurous sports

- Our company always organizes vacations for employees every year, so last week we made a three-day vacation to Long Beach. Actually, we were ready for this trip a month ago. We stayed in a 5-star hotel across the beach. We tried a lot of adventurous sports such as : wind-surfing, jet skiing.

- Are these sentences natural?

Thanks a lot to Teachers,

Namsteven
  

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Our company organizes vacations for employees every year, so last week we had a three-day vacation in/at Long Beach. Actually, we were ready for this trip a month ago. We stayed in/at a 5-star hotel across from the beach.

— Mister Micawber

  • Our company organizes vacations for employees every year, so last week we had a three-day vacation in/at Long Beach.
  • Actually, we were ready for this trip a month ago.
  • We stayed in/at a 5-star hotel across from the beach.
  • We tried a lot of adventurous sports such as wind-surfing and jet-skiing.
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Our company organizes vacations for employees every year, so last week we had a three-day vacation in/at Long Beach. Actually, we were ready for this trip a month ago. We stayed in/at a 5-star hotel across from the beach. We tried a lot of adventurous sports such as wind-surfing and jet-skiing.
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a few things to note:
- "..we made a three-day vacation..", "we had a three day vacation" would be better because when you say make/made, you are creating something so it doesn't quite apply to a vacation. "Took a three day" could be another alternative

- after "actually, we were ready", you jumped to another topic "we stayed in 5-star hotel"..there wasnt a smooth transition. the fa
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