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Peachhh Posted 5 years ago
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Advantages and disavantages of television at home

It is common knowledge that since being invented, television seems to be an indispensable part of many people's lives. Nonetheless, its disadvantages are much more considerable.

Television is obviously regared to be one of the most common digital forms of entertainment or news or knowledge which offers huge numerous channels with different topics which can get better our spiritual and open their horizons.

There is plenty of educational programs which teach us how to behave and how to get along with each other so that children can learn from them and broaden their knowledge.

Besides, television has a positive influence on communication among friends and family. In contrast, television also has some drawbacks which have bad effects on among people.

To begin with, ones who lack self-control in watching TV would allow themselves to sit for hours in front of the screen. Therefore, they do not have enough time to focus on anything else. If we spend too much time on watching television, it will harm to our eyes.

According to some recent surveys, many children are short-sighted because of watching television too much. That is the reasons why it can not be denied to have many negative effects on the human being's mind.

In conclusion,Television has not only benefits but also restrictions. To balance our lives, we consider watching TV as small interests to make improvement ourselves.

  

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You have too many paragraphs. A well-balanced essay has an introduction, conclusion and two body paragraphs. If this is an IELTS Task 2 essay, it does not have enough words.

  • You have too many paragraphs.
  • A well-balanced essay has an introduction, conclusion and two body paragraphs.
  • If this is an IELTS Task 2 essay, it does not have enough words.
  • You need 250 or more.
  • It is common knowledge that since being invented, television has become seems to be an indispensable part of many people's lives.
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You have too many paragraphs.

A well-balanced essay has an introduction, conclusion and two body paragraphs.

If this is an IELTS Task 2 essay, it does not have enough words. You need 250 or more.


It is common knowledge that since being invented, television has become seems to be an indispensable part of many people

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