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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child having a large number of toys

It is observed that mothers and fathers provide multitudes of toys to off springs in order to alleviate child's boredom. One of the biggest advantage of being surrounded by lots of toys is that it can use for fulfilling the educational purposes. However, the ramification of developing introvert characteristics cannot be ignored.

On the one hand, one positive impact of having myriads of toys help children to involve in intellectual activities. In other words, toys assist in the development of cognitive abilities. For example, while playing scrabble, children can ameliorate vocabularies and correct word formation and spellings of English language. Moreover, Lego blocks can assist children in identification of colours due to range of different colour blocks it offer and recognition of alphabets, which are written on blocks, are also possible. On top of that, these sort of toys can create a sense of competition and teamwork when multiplayer games are being played. Therefore, toys can play a major role in children's understanding and constructive thinking which can be a plus point in initial educational level of children.

On the flip side, while having lots of toys can be advantageous, but it can inculcate the habit of being alone among children. Not only do children spend majority of time in playing indoor games with these toys but also they avoid mingling up with peers and resist involving in physical games that are being played outside. As a result, the trait of introvert nature arises in the personalities. Take the example of one of my friend's sons, being surrounded by huge number of toys, he lacks the etiquette of greeting people and do not want people around him. Thus, toys can psychologically separate children from people and friends around them.

In conclusion, huge number of toys can be beneficial when it comes to teach children about variety of educational activity. Nevertheless, the predicament toys offer can develop detrimental personality trait of being alone.

  

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It is observed that mothers and fathers provide multitudes (Bad word choice) of toys to off springs (Oh dear, me. That is just terrible! ) in order to alleviate child's boredom.

  • It is observed that mothers and fathers provide multitudes (Bad word choice) of toys to off springs (Oh dear, me.
  • That is just terrible!
  • ) in order to alleviate child's boredom.
  • One of the biggest advantage of being surrounded by lots of toys is that it (wrong pronoun.
  • ) can use (wrong verb form) for fulfilling the educational purposes.
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It is observed that mothers and fathers provide multitudes (Bad word choice) of toys to off springs (Oh dear, me. That is just terrible! The word is spelled wrong, and It is not at all appropriate in this context.) in order to alleviate child's boredom. One of the biggest adva

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