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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

adorable appearance

Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

I’m Candy, and I was nicknamed Mango by my classmates. Maybe it’s because I have an adorable appearance which help me to gain popularity. Speaking of/With regard to/ Concerning my personality, I am an outgoing, warm-hearted person. I can get along with people very well in whatever situation.
  

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Mangos are ovoid and green or red. I wouldn't call that 'adorable'. You might want to reassess your popularity.

— Mister Micawber

  • Mangos are ovoid and green or red.
  • I wouldn't call that 'adorable'.
  • You might want to reassess your popularity.
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Mangos are ovoid and green or red. I wouldn't call that 'adorable'. You might want to reassess your popularity.
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You may well have an adorable appearance, but mentioning it sounds very boastful. I would suggest the following:

I’m Candy, and I was nicknamed Mango by my classmates. I am an outgoing, warm-hearted person. I can get along with people very well in whatever situation.
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I'm Candy, and I was nicknamed Mongo by my classmates. Maybe it's because I was serious in speech and manner which made me a stern appearance. In fact, I am an outgoing, warm-hearted person. I can get along with people very well in whatever situation.
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Mango or Mongo? Adorable appearance or stern appearance? Your most recent version is fine grammatically (except it should be ". . . which gave me a stern appearance"), but of course it doesn't mean the same as the original.
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