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Sebayanpendam Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Adjectives needed

Hi,

Can anyone check the adjectives in the text, please?

A camel's 1. long legs have 2. strong muscles whcih enable the animal to carry 3. more load over 4. long distances. A camel can carry as much as 450 kilogrammes of load. It is 5. normal for a camel to work as a beast of burden for only six to eight months of the year and for the remainder of the time, it needs to rest and recuperate. The camel's milk is much more 7. nutritious than that from a cow. It is 8. rich in fat and 9. rich in potassium, iron and Vitamin C. It is normally drunk 10. raw and the frothy liquid being sweet, appeals to those who have a tooth sweet tooth.

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What should I tell you about the adjectives? They seem appropriate, but other structural elements of your sentences need repair.

  • What should I tell you about the adjectives?
  • They seem appropriate, but other structural elements of your sentences need repair.
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What should I tell you about the adjectives? They seem appropriate, but other structural elements of your sentences need repair.
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Hi,

Sir, could you please point out what is wrong with the other structural elements?

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A camel's long legs have strong muscles, which enable the animal to carry heavy loads over long distances. A camel can carry as much as 450 kgs.

It is usual for a camel to work as a beast of burden for only six to eight months of the year, and for the remainder of the time, it needs to rest and recuperate.

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