Hi all,
I hope to get your responses on the following:
1. “He was standing in front of the fire, round-shouldered, his hands in his coat pockets, his feet thrust into a pair of Ravelston’s slippers which were much too big for him.”
- Is “round-shouldered” an adjective modifying “He” here, not an absolute like the next phrases in the sentence?
- Had it better be placed near “He”? “Round-shouldered, he was standing . . . “
2. “He, bold in resolve, planned to win her over.”
“Anton and Lacey met, completely unaware of their love for one another.”
“Anton continued to stand there, entranced by her spell”
-Are “bold in resolve,” “completely unaware of their love,” and “entranced by her spell” adjective phrases modifying only the nouns/pronouns (“He” or “Anton and Lacy” or “Anton” here)?
- I saw some websites mentioning “completely unaware of their love” and “entranced by her spell” as absolute phrases, meaning they modify the entire main clauses. But I find no leading nouns here as the absolute phrase construction demands (a noun plus a modifier—participle or not), only adjectives. Please help clarify with possibilities of absolute phrases without a leading noun.
Thank you
flora123 1. ” - Is “round-shouldered” an adjective modifying “He” here, not an absolute like the next phrases in the sentence? Yes.
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flora1231. “He was standing in front of the fire, round-shouldered, his hands in his coat pockets, his feet thrust into a pair of Ravelston’s slippers which were much too big for him.”
- Is “round-shouldered” an adjective modifying “He” here, not an absolute like the next phrases in the sentence? Yes.
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flora1231. “He was standing in front of the fire, round-shouldered, his hands in his coat pockets, his feet thrust into a pair of Ravelston’s slippers which were much too big for him.”- Is “round-shouldered” an adjective modifying “He” here, not an absolute like the next phrases in the sentence? - Had it better be placed near “He”? “Round-shouldered, he was standing . . .