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Ansonguy Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

Addition of "your" to [purchase/graduation/completion]

My friends' sentences are given below.

(1a) We are happy to give you a full refund within five days of purchase.

(2a) You will get a job within three months of graduation.

(3a) You will receive your certificate within one month of course completion.

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My revised sentences are given next.

(1b) We are happy to give you a full refund within five days of your purchase.

(2b) You will get a job within three months of your graduation.

(3b) You will receive your certificate within one month of your course completion.

Some of my non-native English speaking friends think it's okay to add "your". But, my other friends think it's wrong.

Is it okay to add "your"? Thank you.

  

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ansonguy My friends' sentences are given below. (1a) We are happy to give you a full refund within five days of purchase. (2a) You will get a job within three months of graduation.

  • ansonguy My friends' sentences are given below.
  • (1a) We are happy to give you a full refund within five days of purchase.
  • (2a) You will get a job within three months of graduation.
  • (3a) You will receive your certificate within one month of course completion.
  • All OK.
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ansonguy

My friends' sentences are given below.

(1a) We are happy to give you a full refund within five days of purchase.

(2a) You will get a job within three months of graduation.

(3a) You will receive your certificate within one month of course completion.

All OK.

ansonguy

My revised sentences are give

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