My friends' sentences are given below.
(1a) We are happy to give you a full refund within five days of purchase.
(2a) You will get a job within three months of graduation.
(3a) You will receive your certificate within one month of course completion.
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My revised sentences are given next.
(1b) We are happy to give you a full refund within five days of your purchase.
(2b) You will get a job within three months of your graduation.
(3b) You will receive your certificate within one month of your course completion.
Some of my non-native English speaking friends think it's okay to add "your". But, my other friends think it's wrong.
Is it okay to add "your"? Thank you.
ansonguy My friends' sentences are given below. (1a) We are happy to give you a full refund within five days of purchase. (2a) You will get a job within three months of graduation.
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ansonguyMy friends' sentences are given below.
(1a) We are happy to give you a full refund within five days of purchase.
(2a) You will get a job within three months of graduation.
(3a) You will receive your certificate within one month of course completion.
All OK.
ansonguyMy revised sentences are give