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Spooner Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Adding additional information using ()

"I believe the training skill sets will also prove to be useful in working as a fitness trainer in Canada (either privately or at a fitness center)."

Hello.

I just want to hear your expert opinion on adding some information using parenthesis as I did in above sentence.

Does it make sense? If not, would you mind giving me some suggestions?

Thanks
  

Top answer

No, parentheses should not be used here. They indicate extra, unimportant information, but a resume should carry only important information. Delete either the parentheses or the whole matter within them.

— Mister Micawber

  • No, parentheses should not be used here.
  • They indicate extra, unimportant information, but a resume should carry only important information.
  • Delete either the parentheses or the whole matter within them.
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No, parentheses should not be used here. They indicate extra, unimportant information, but a resume should carry only important information. Delete either the parentheses or the whole matter within them.
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