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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Adding a word
Should I add 'who' to this sentence?
Meanwhile, Invidoo’s replacement imp revealed himself to be Druzil, a servant of Errtu, whose one hundred years of banishment from the Prime Material Plane were almost over and (who) was plotting his vengeance on Drizzt.
Meanwhile, Invidoo’s replacement imp revealed himself to be Druzil, a servant of Errtu, whose one hundred years of banishment from the Prime Material Plane were almost over and (who) was plotting his vengeance on Drizzt.
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Yes, you must. To whom do you want 'whose' to refer?
- Yes, you must.
- To whom do you want 'whose' to refer?
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Thanks for your help. I want both the 'whose' and the 'who' to refer to Errtu.
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Then I suggest you reword a bit to make that clear. You have so many people in your sentences!
I suggest you consider using two sentences.
I suggest you consider using two sentences.
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