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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Should I add the word 'being' to improve the sentences? Shortly thereafter, Innovindil and the rest of her clan faced an assault from Clan Karuck and their orc allies in the Moonwood itself, and the elves were once again routed. This cunning attack proved much more effective than the previous one, with Innovindil and her pegasus Sunset (being) slain as well as twelve other elves.
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cboutin3 Should I add the word 'being' to improve the sentences? Shortly thereafter, Innovindil and the rest of her clan faced an assault from Clan Karuck and their orc allies in the Moonwood itself, and the elves were once again routed. This cunning attack proved much more effective than the previous one, with Innovindil and her pegasus Sunset as well as twelve other elves (being) slain as well as twelve other elves.
- cboutin3 Should I add the word 'being' to improve the sentences?
- Shortly thereafter, Innovindil and the rest of her clan faced an assault from Clan Karuck and their orc allies in the Moonwood itself, and the elves were once again routed.
- This cunning attack proved much more effective than the previous one, with Innovindil and her pegasus Sunset as well as twelve other elves (being) slain as well as twelve other elves.
- being fits well.
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cboutin3 Should I add the word 'being' to improve the sentences? Shortly thereafter, Innovindil and the rest of her clan faced an assault from Clan Karuck and their orc allies in the Moonwood itself, and the elves were once again routed. This cunning attack proved much more effective than the previous one, with Innovindil and her pegasus Sunset as well as twelve other elv
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