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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Adding a phrase

Should I add the phrase 'levels of" to this sentence?
The magic restored the natural order in Turmish and raised the Emerald Enclave’s magic to its (levels of) potency before the catastrophic event.
  

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I suggest this. . and r estored the Emerald Enclave’s magic to its level of potency before the catastrophic event.

— Clive

  • I suggest this.
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  • and r estored the Emerald Enclave’s magic to its level of potency before the catastrophic event.
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I suggest this.

. . . and restored the Emerald Enclave’s magic to its level of potency before the catastrophic event.
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Thanks for your help. Is this a good revision then? The magic reestablished the natural order in Turmish and restored the Emerald Enclave’s magic to its level of potency before the catastrophic event
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Now I notice that the repetition of 'magic' is rather discordant. Can you try to improve or avoid it?
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Thanks, that's a good point. This better? The ritual reestablished the natural order in Turmish and restored the Emerald Enclave’s magic to its level of potency before the catastrophic event.
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