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Anonymous Posted 4 years ago
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Across the bar

Jeff sits at the bar with a drink trying to collect his thoughts, but five loud drunk men, seated at a table across the bar, make it difficult.


1. Is 'across the bar' OK and enough here?

2. How would you punctuate the whole sentence?

  

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anonymous 1. Is 'across the bar' OK and enough here? No.

  • anonymous 1.
  • Is 'across the bar' OK and enough here?
  • No.
  • Once you are inside the building we call a bar, the bar is the heavy counter where the drinks are served.
  • The men were across the room.
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anonymous1. Is 'across the bar' OK and enough here?

No. Once you are inside the building we call a bar, the bar is the heavy counter where the drinks are served. The men were across the room.

anonymous2. How would you punctuate the whole sentence?

I would delete the last two commas.

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