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Quaerereverum Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Accomplish something that you didn't think you can
Talk about a time when you accomplished something you did not think you could.
When I dicided to study overseas my parents insisted that I got my driving licens in Iran since it was cheaper, but I always postponed doing it, since I have fear of driving a car. Finally, I had to give in and enroll for a driving class. In the first session, I had to turn into a small alley; I was scared badly since it was a narrow path, but my mentor helped me to overcome my anxiety. I was so tense that after each session I always experienced pain in my legs. Eventually, after twelve sessions I passed both practical and theoritical exams, even though I didn't have any extra practice.
Thank you so much for your time and effort.
When I dicided to study overseas my parents insisted that I got my driving licens in Iran since it was cheaper, but I always postponed doing it, since I have fear of driving a car. Finally, I had to give in and enroll for a driving class. In the first session, I had to turn into a small alley; I was scared badly since it was a narrow path, but my mentor helped me to overcome my anxiety. I was so tense that after each session I always experienced pain in my legs. Eventually, after twelve sessions I passed both practical and theoritical exams, even though I didn't have any extra practice.
Thank you so much for your time and effort.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please post a revised version: When I dicided to study overse as m y parents insisted that I got my driving licens in Iran since it was cheaper, but I always postponed doing it, since (Two 'since's; make 2 sentences) I have fear of driving a car. Finally, I had to give in and enroll for a driving class.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please post a revised version: When I dicided to study overse as m y parents insisted that I got my driving licens in Iran since it was cheaper, but I always postponed doing it, since (Two 'since's; make 2 sentences) I have fear of driving a car.
- Finally, I had to give in and enroll for a driving class.
- In the first session, I had to turn into a small alley; I was scared badly since it was a narrow path, but my mentor helped me to overcome my anxiety.
- I was so tense that after each session I always experienced pain in my legs.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please post a revised version:
When I dicided to study overseas my parents insisted that I got my driving licens in Iran since it was cheaper, but I always postponed doing it, since (Two 'since's; make 2 sentences) I have fear of driving a car. Finally, I had to give in and
When I dicided to study overseas my parents insisted that I got my driving licens in Iran since it was cheaper, but I always postponed doing it, since (Two 'since's; make 2 sentences) I have fear of driving a car. Finally, I had to give in and
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- When I decided to study overseas, my parents insisted that I get my driving licence in Iran because it was cheaper. But, I always postponed doing it, since I have fear of driving a car. Finally, I had to give in and enroll for a driving class. In the first session, I had to turn into a small alley; I was scared badly since it was a narrow path, but my mentor helped me to overcome my anxi
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Much better!
When I decided to study overseas, my parents insisted that I get my driving licence in Iran because it was cheaper. However, I always postponed doing it, since I have a fear of driving a car. Finally, I had to give in and enroll in a driving class. In the first session, I had to turn into a small alley; I was scared badly since it was a narrow path
When I decided to study overseas, my parents insisted that I get my driving licence in Iran because it was cheaper. However, I always postponed doing it, since I have a fear of driving a car. Finally, I had to give in and enroll in a driving class. In the first session, I had to turn into a small alley; I was scared badly since it was a narrow path
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