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Kedra Posted 19 years ago
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Access to admin area of the software. Thank you!

1i00My company sells rental management software. We've set up the demo version and want to give an acess to admin panel of it to those, who are interested. But to reduce the risk of possible deletion, misuse or gamage of the demo, we do not want to publish admin acess login/password right at the login page. Instead, we ask those, who are interested in seeing the admin area, to drop up a line and we'll send them login/password. Below is how I inform visitors about it. Please check if it's grammatically correct. Does it sound ok? Which one is better?Thank you very much in advance! [A]02i02br
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00Wondering how much of control an admin has?02br
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02br 02br 01i 00My company sells rental management software. We've set up 01b 00a 02b 00demo version and want to 01b 00give access02b 00 to 01b 00its02b 00 admin panel to01b 00 those who02b 00 are interested. But to reduce the risk of possible deletion, misuse or 01b 00damage02b 00 of the demo, we do not want to publish 01b 00the02b 00 admin acess login/password right at the login page.

— Mister Micawber

  • 02br 02br 01i 00My company sells rental management software.
  • We've set up 01b 00a 02b 00demo version and want to 01b 00give access02b 00 to 01b 00its02b 00 admin panel to01b 00 those who02b 00 are interested.
  • But to reduce the risk of possible deletion, misuse or 01b 00damage02b 00 of the demo, we do not want to publish 01b 00the02b 00 admin acess login/password right at the login page.
  • Instead, we ask 01b 00those who02b 00 are interested in seeing the admin 01b 00area to02b 00 drop 01b 00us02b 00 a line and we'll send them 01b 00the02b 00 login/password.
  • Below is how I 01b 00am informing02b 00 visitors about it.
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01i00My company sells rental management software. We've set up 01b00a 02b00demo version and want to 01b00give access02b00 to 01b00its02b00 admin panel to01b00 those who02b00 are interested. But to reduce the risk of possible deletion, misuse
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0I appreciate your quick assistance, Mister Micawber! Thank you.0-
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