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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
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Accıdent If you help me with this pragraph I would be happy, thanks

My mind just fixed to this voice and everything stopped. The old man was so fixed with the idea of killing me that he was not aware of what was happening around him and could not hear the horn of the truck coming at us. Although truck had braked abruptly to avoid the old man but it couldn't swerve and pass over us, so that crushing the old man into the road. I think when the truck hit the old man, it took him over me and squeezed him into the bumper, and then dragged poor woman several meters. And I survived miraculously.
  

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My mind was focused on / was attentive to / was mesmerized by just fixed to this voice and everything stopped. The old man was so fixed with intent on the idea of killing me that he was not aware of what was happening around him and could did not hear the horn of the truck coming at us. Although truck had braked abruptly to try to avoid all of us the old man , but it couldn't swerve and pass by us, so that it crush ed the old man into the road.

— AlpheccaStars

  • My mind was focused on / was attentive to / was mesmerized by just fixed to this voice and everything stopped.
  • The old man was so fixed with intent on the idea of killing me that he was not aware of what was happening around him and could did not hear the horn of the truck coming at us.
  • Although truck had braked abruptly to try to avoid all of us the old man , but it couldn't swerve and pass by us, so that it crush ed the old man into the road.
  • I think when the truck struck the old man with its bumper, it took him over gave me a glancing blow and squeezed him into the bumper, and then dragged the poor woman several meters.
  • And I survived miraculously.
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My mind was focused on / was attentive to / was mesmerized by just fixed to this voice and everything stopped. The old man was so fixed with intent on the idea of killing me that he was not aware of what was happening around him and could did not hear the horn of the truck coming at us. Although truck had braked abruptly to try to avoid
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