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You wrote over 360 words. The minimum is 250. You will not lose points for writing more; however, longer essays generally do not get high band scores. And there are many reasons for this.
First, the longer the essay, the more chances you have to make errors, and you will lose points for each of those errors.
Second, your writing may be repetitious and wordy. This will cost you poin
Spelling, word usage and punctuation errors are highlighted in yellow. Other errors are in green. There are more issues that I have not commented on.
You did not answer the essay prompt clearly. The examiner is looking for an answer to this question: To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is good to know a good handful of adverbs of extent because this is a ve