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USF Posted 14 years ago
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abstract of my paper
Hi,
I hope it is OK if I check my writing for paper in small parts. If it isn't please tell me.
This is abstract of my paper:
Effects of different temperature and pressure and two common inlets for injecting gas on the rate of deposition and uniformity of coating layers of polysilicon on the wafers of silicon are investigated. The system is modeled by a finite element software and the results of simulations are harvested by Computational Fluid Dynamics (CFD) tool of the software, and based on real scale of SEMATECH BTU/Bruce horizontal hot-wall LPCVD system. Characteristic of materials, boundary conditions and applied physical and chemical equations are initial factors of the model.
I hope it is OK, if it isn't I would appreciate if you mention my mistakes, or places that sound odd. Thanks.
I hope it is OK if I check my writing for paper in small parts. If it isn't please tell me.
This is abstract of my paper:
Effects of different temperature and pressure and two common inlets for injecting gas on the rate of deposition and uniformity of coating layers of polysilicon on the wafers of silicon are investigated. The system is modeled by a finite element software and the results of simulations are harvested by Computational Fluid Dynamics (CFD) tool of the software, and based on real scale of SEMATECH BTU/Bruce horizontal hot-wall LPCVD system. Characteristic of materials, boundary conditions and applied physical and chemical equations are initial factors of the model.
I hope it is OK, if it isn't I would appreciate if you mention my mistakes, or places that sound odd. Thanks.
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The effects of different temperatures and pressures on the rate of deposition of and uniformity of coating of layers of polysilicon on wafers of silicon when injecting gas through two common inlets are investigated. The system is modeled by finite element software, and the results of simulations are harvested by the Computational Fluid Dynamics (CFD) tool of the software, and based on real scale of SEMATECH BTU Bruce horizontal hot-wall LPCVD system. Characteristics of materials, boundary conditions and applied physical and chemical equations are initial factors of the model.
- The effects of different temperatures and pressures on the rate of deposition of and uniformity of coating of layers of polysilicon on wafers of silicon when injecting gas through two common inlets are investigated.
- The system is modeled by finite element software, and the results of simulations are harvested by the Computational Fluid Dynamics (CFD) tool of the software, and based on real scale of SEMATECH BTU Bruce horizontal hot-wall LPCVD system.
- Characteristics of materials, boundary conditions and applied physical and chemical equations are initial factors of the model.
- You lost me at the bit in red.
- I hope the first sentence says what you want it to.
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The effects of different temperatures and pressures on the rate of deposition of and uniformity of coating of layers of polysilicon on wafers of silicon when injecting gas through two common inlets are investigated. The system is modeled by finite element software, and the results of simulations are harvested by the Computational Fluid Dynamics (CFD) tool of the software,
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Thanks for your time and reply. I am just informing that "the results of simulations are based on the real scale of SEMATECH...". I can't see the problem. Could you tell me where is the problem you see?
enoonYou lost me at the bit in red.Why? You meant it is too long?
enoon I hope the first sentence says what you want it to.
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Thanks for your time and reply. I am just informing that "the results of simulations are based on the real scale of SEMATECH...". I can't see the problem. Could you tell me where is the problem you see?
You didn't put "the" real scale, I don't know what a real scale of a piece of equipment is in the context of modeling, and it was not clear what was bas
You didn't put "the" real scale, I don't know what a real scale of a piece of equipment is in the context of modeling, and it was not clear what was bas
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OK. I meant "real size" of the system. I wanted to emphasize that we use very actual sizes of the system.
enoonThe first one.You meant this: The effects of different temperatures and pressures on the rate of deposition of and uniformity of coating of layers of polysilicon on wafers of silicon when injecting gas through two common inlets are investigated.
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I should amend this sentence:
Let me explain, it is supposed to be a journal, and it is not common to mention sizes at Abstract. Instead give the general idea of the work. I hope I understood what you were saying.
That was my misunderstanding.
Thanks
Let me explain, it is supposed to be a journal, and it is not common to mention sizes at Abstract. Instead give the general idea of the work. I hope I understood what you were saying.
That was my misunderstanding.
Thanks
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OK, second try:
The effects of different temperatures and pressures on the rate of deposition of and uniformity of coating of layers of polysilicon on wafers of silicon when injecting gas through two common inlets are investigated. The system is modeled by finite element software, and the results of simulations are harvested by the Computational Fluid Dynamics (CFD) tool of the software
The effects of different temperatures and pressures on the rate of deposition of and uniformity of coating of layers of polysilicon on wafers of silicon when injecting gas through two common inlets are investigated. The system is modeled by finite element software, and the results of simulations are harvested by the Computational Fluid Dynamics (CFD) tool of the software
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