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English 1b3 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Absolute Clauses

Here is a quote from "A Thousand Splendid Suns" by Khaled Hosseini:

Sometimes, at day's end, the cook at the buffet-style restaurant let Rasheed bring home a few leftovers-as long as he was discreet about it-cold meatballs sloshing in oil; fried chicken wings, the crust gone hard and dry; stuffed pasta shells turned chewy; stiff, gravelly rice.

Absolute clauses... I feel the bolded phrases are failed attempts at creating absolute phrases/clauses. My understanding is that an absolute phrase/clause begins with a noun and is followed by a modifier. The two bolded phrases, however, begin with nouns but which are followed by verbs that have their auxiliary verbs removed (the crust had gone hard and dry; stuffed pasta shells that had turned chewy).

Though they do not create the same meanings, here are how they should look were they absolute phrases/clauses: the crust hard and dry; stuffed pasta shells chewy.

Can someone please confirm I'm correct or explain why I'm wrong?
Thanks
  

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I cannot comment on your explanation, but the bolded phrases work fine for me.

  • I cannot comment on your explanation, but the bolded phrases work fine for me.
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I cannot comment on your explanation, but the bolded phrases work fine for me.
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English 1b3I feel the bolded phrases are failed attempts at creating absolute phrases/clauses.
The current terminology for "absolute clause" is "small clause". A small clause is simply [NP XP]. The subject of a small clause is always a noun phrase. The predicate can be any kind of phrase. Noun, adjective, preposition, and (non-finite) verb phrases are common.
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In my experience, an absolute clause (from the Latin 'absolitus', meaning free or unconnected) is defined as a supplementary adjunct that contains a subject, is subordinate in form but, crucially, has no syntactic link to the main clause:

[1] "His hands gripping the door, he let out a volley of curses".
[2] "This done, she walked off without another word".
[3] "With
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Thanks for your responses.

I would first like to say that I too feel the topic sentence is grammatical. I just couldn't explain how it was.

It appears I have two differing explanations, which is no surprise to me. In this post I will respond to CJ and Bill J in the next. I hope I hear back from you guys, but I do understand if you don't have the time and/or interest to.

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Hi BillJ - and apologies for misspelling your name in my reply to CJ (I put a space between Bill and J - maybe you didn't even notice).

After carefully reading the topic sentences again, I can now see the first of my examples is not an absolute clause. The second, however, I don't see how it is not an absolute clause...

Would you say this both of these are absolute constructions
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English 1b3It appears I have two differing explanations
Yes, but the differences are mostly superficial. The only real difference is our judgment about the role of the crust gone hard and dry, and even then, I see BillJ's point. the crust gone hard and dry does modify chicken wings, so according to most definitions of 'absolute clause',
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CalifJimI wonder if it's as obvious in the formulation below that the crust gone hard and dry is not an absolute clause but a modifier of the fried chicken wings.
Fair point.
CalifJimIt is turned chewy that has no noun phrase at the beginning. stuffed pasta shells is not part of the clause being considered. The text is not saying The s
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CalifJimI wonder if it's as obvious in the formulation below that the crust gone hard and dry is not an absolute clause but a modifier of the fried chicken wings.The crust gone hard and dry, the cook let Rasheed take the fried chicken wings home.
After re-reading your post, I have to say that this is definitely an absolute clause, according to some credible si
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English 1b3a couple of examples
These three possibilities come about because be is an auxiliary for the continuous tenses ( 1 ) and an auxiliary for the passive voice ( 2 ), and have is an auxiliary for the perfect tenses ( 3 ).

1 Present participle (-ing) -
Did you know that the man standing there is the CEO of a well-known corpo
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English 1b3The crust gone hard and dry, the cook let Rasheed take the fried chicken wings home.
1 The crust gone hard and dry, the cook let Rasheed take the fried chicken wings home.
2 The cook let Rasheed take home the fried chicken wings, the crust gone hard and dry.

The question is whether our interpretation of the crust gone hard and dry

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