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Subash2008 Posted 12 years ago
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Abruptly

Dear Teachers, could you please check the email below for any mistakes?

This is to bring your attention that our work site generator having intermittent issues and going breakdown abruptly. It will cause computers to power off , resulting in data loss and program crash. Three computers got corrupted last week.

Thanks.
Subash
  

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This is to bring your attention that our work site generator is having intermittent issues and is going to break down soon . It will cause computers to lose power , resulting in data loss and program crash es . Three computers already got corrupted last week.

  • This is to bring your attention that our work site generator is having intermittent issues and is going to break down soon .
  • It will cause computers to lose power , resulting in data loss and program crash es .
  • Three computers already got corrupted last week.
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This is to bring your attention that our work site generator is having intermittent issues and is going to break down soon. It will cause computers to lose power, resulting in data loss and program crashes. Three computers already got corrupted last week.
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Thank you EG. I appreciate your time. Can I use abruptly in this way; our work site generator is having intermittent issues and sometimes shutdown abruptly.

Thanks,
Subash
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Yes, but say shuts down abruptly. Emotion: wink

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