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Sdasd tont Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Above this three sentence, which one is correct?

(1) Aging as a natural law, is manifested as decreased physiological function, proliferation capacity and immune responsibility.

(2)Aging, as a natural law, is manifested as decreased physiological function, proliferation capacity and immune responsibility.

(3)As a natural law, aging is manifested as decreased physiological function, proliferation capacity and immune responsibility.


Above this three sentence, which one is correct?

Thanks!

  

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#1 is incorrect. #2 and #3 are OK. However, there is a problem with the adjective 'decreased'.

  • #1 is incorrect.
  • #2 and #3 are OK.
  • However, there is a problem with the adjective 'decreased'.
  • It can be taken to apply only to physiological function, instead of to all 3 phrases.
  • You could say eg As a natural law, aging is manifested as decreases in physiological function, in proliferation capacity and in immune responsibility.
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#1 is incorrect. #2 and #3 are OK. However, there is a problem with the adjective 'decreased'. It can be taken to apply only to physiological function, instead of to all 3 phrases.

You could say eg As a natural law, aging is manifested as decreases in physiological function, in proliferation capacity and in immune responsibility.

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I vote for Clive's rewrite.

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