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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
About writting an email to my dissertation supervisor
Can anyone help me correct my wrriting?
I'm quite nervous, it's my first time to write to my supervisor...
Thank you guys very much!!! Here is my email:
Dear Dr ABC
My name is ABC and I'm a Master's student in nursing, in the Department of Primary Care and Public Health.
I'm very glad that you agreed to be my dissertation supervisor. I still remembered the lecture you gave us few weeks ago about Quality Improvement. It was a very interesting lecture and I really emjoyed it. So it's really my honor to have you as my dissertation supervisor.
I've finished my dissertation protocol and I'm wondering whether you could have a look at my protocol and give me some advices. It's my first to do such a important study protocol and also due to my own limitations, I'm really not sure whether I'm on the right track.
Dissertation protocol has been attatched to this email.
Thank you very much!
Respectfully
ABC
I'm quite nervous, it's my first time to write to my supervisor...
Thank you guys very much!!! Here is my email:
Dear Dr ABC
My name is ABC and I'm a Master's student in nursing, in the Department of Primary Care and Public Health.
I'm very glad that you agreed to be my dissertation supervisor. I still remembered the lecture you gave us few weeks ago about Quality Improvement. It was a very interesting lecture and I really emjoyed it. So it's really my honor to have you as my dissertation supervisor.
I've finished my dissertation protocol and I'm wondering whether you could have a look at my protocol and give me some advices. It's my first to do such a important study protocol and also due to my own limitations, I'm really not sure whether I'm on the right track.
Dissertation protocol has been attatched to this email.
Thank you very much!
Respectfully
ABC
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Dear Dr ABC My name is ABC and I'm a Master's student in nursing, in the Department of Primary Care and Public Health. I'm honored to be under your supervision. I still remembered the lecture you gave us few weeks ago about Quality Improvement.
- Dear Dr ABC My name is ABC and I'm a Master's student in nursing, in the Department of Primary Care and Public Health.
- I'm honored to be under your supervision.
- I still remembered the lecture you gave us few weeks ago about Quality Improvement.
- It was a very interesting lecture and I really enjoyed it.
- Actually I've finished my dissertation protocol and I was wondering whether you could have a look at my protocol and give me some advices.
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Dear Dr ABC
My name is ABC and I'm a Master's student in nursing, in the Department of Primary Care and Public Health. I'm honored to be under your supervision. I still remembered the lecture you gave us few weeks ago about Quality Improvement. It was a very interesting lecture and I really enjoyed it.
Actually I've finished my dissertation protocol and I was wondering whether you cou
My name is ABC and I'm a Master's student in nursing, in the Department of Primary Care and Public Health. I'm honored to be under your supervision. I still remembered the lecture you gave us few weeks ago about Quality Improvement. It was a very interesting lecture and I really enjoyed it.
Actually I've finished my dissertation protocol and I was wondering whether you cou
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