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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
About the waiter's life
Can I write:
a Susan is a waitress. She works in a restaurant in town. She wears a clean shirt and a skirt to work.
b. One day, she cleaned the restaurant's floor. Suddenly, she found a wallet under the table. She knew the wallet's owner is her father's friend.
c After that, she returned the wallet to the owner. When the man saw his wallet, he thanked Susan and praised her who is a honest girl.
a Susan is a waitress. She works in a restaurant in town. She wears a clean shirt and a skirt to work.
b. One day, she cleaned the restaurant's floor. Suddenly, she found a wallet under the table. She knew the wallet's owner is her father's friend.
c After that, she returned the wallet to the owner. When the man saw his wallet, he thanked Susan and praised her who is a honest girl.
Top answer
Hi, I'm happy to see that you have posted slightly longer segments here. It's a better way to improve your English writing. You should join your sentences together and revise some of your tenses.
- Hi, I'm happy to see that you have posted slightly longer segments here.
- It's a better way to improve your English writing.
- You should join your sentences together and revise some of your tenses.
- a Susan is a waitress who works in a restaurant in town.
- She wears a clean shirt and a skirt to work.
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Hi,
I'm happy to see that you have posted slightly longer segments here. It's a better way to improve your English writing.
You should join your sentences together and revise some of your tenses.
a Susan is a waitress who works in a restaurant in town. She wears a clean shirt and a skirt to work.
b. One day, she waas cleaning the restaurant's f
I'm happy to see that you have posted slightly longer segments here. It's a better way to improve your English writing.
You should join your sentences together and revise some of your tenses.
a Susan is a waitress who works in a restaurant in town. She wears a clean shirt and a skirt to work.
b. One day, she waas cleaning the restaurant's f
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