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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
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About the trip in Hot Spring

Can I write:

Last holidays, John visited the Poring Hot Spring. They followed the jungle trail leading up to the canopy walkways. He stood in a queue to walk across the walkways.

At the pool site, he saw the people dipping in the spring water in pools. He stopped to buy souvenirs. He was enjoyable.

Anyone can give me comments?
  

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Last holidays, John visited the Poring Hot Spring. They followed the jungle trail leading up to the canopy walkways. He stood in a queue to walk across the walkways.

  • Last holidays, John visited the Poring Hot Spring.
  • They followed the jungle trail leading up to the canopy walkways.
  • He stood in a queue to walk across the walkways.
  • At the pool site, he sawthe people dipping in the spring water in pools.
  • He stopped to buy souvenirs.
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Last holidays, John visited the Poring Hot Spring. They followed the jungle trail leading up to the canopy walkways. He stood in a queue to walk across the walkways.

At the pool site, he sawthe people dipping in the spring water in pools. He stopped to buy souvenirs. He was enjoyable.

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I try to correct:

Last holiday, John visited the Poring Hot Spring. He followed the jungle trail leading

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