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Vincent Teo Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

About the tenses 9

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  1. I have a best friend named Yee. We have been friends since we were seven years old.



  2. Yee is the eldest in her family. She has a sister named Min. She is slightly taller than me. She has a short black hair and two small eyes. She always wears a pair of glasses just like me.



  3. She also helps me in my homework. Sometimes, we will study and play together. We normally share our problems to each other to get good advice. When I was sad, she will tell me some jokes that make me laugh. She always cheers me up.



  4. She is smart girl and often gets good results in her examination. She is also a helpful girl. She always helps her mother to do housework. Her neighbour often praised hr for being such a good girl.



  5. Although we are different, we have same hobbies, which are reading. During holidays, we will go to the public library to borrow books. We also exchange our books.



  6. I am very happy to have such a best friend like Yee. I hope our friendship will last forever.


  

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How about these sentence above?
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>She is smart girl and often gets good results in her examination.
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She has a short black hair and two small eyes.

She has short black hair and small eyes. (The way you have written it, she has only one hair. And we can assume she has two eyes!)

share our problems to each other

share our problems with each other

When I w
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Her neighbour has often praised her for being such a good girl.
OR you can say: Her neighbour often praises her ...)
If you say "Her neighbour often praised her" that suggests that the neighbour has stopped praising her.


Although we are different, we have

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