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Vincent Teo Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

About the tenses 7

Can you give me some comments?



  1. Everyone has a best friend. I also have. My best friend is Lim. She is wearing a pair of spectacles. She has a black and short hair. She also is a librarian.



  2. She not only is my best friend, she also is my neighbour. She is intelligent student because she has best results in her class. She also is a helpful girl. When her classmates have difficulties, she will help them. All the teachers and friends like her.



  3. Because her father was died, so her mother needs to work. Sometimes, she will cook herself. When I a mboring, I shall invite her come to my house and play with me. Lim always helps her mother to clean the house.



  4. We also goes to the playground every weekend. At times, I shall be partaking my joyous with her. When I am unhappy, she will comforting me.



  5. I am feeling happy because I have a best friend. I hope Lim is my best friend forever.


  

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  • But, some members encourage me to post it in a context to make me improve instead of a short sentence.
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Sorry for posting in the passage. I am sure I must get a complain from other members. But, some members encourage me to post it in a context to make me improve instead of a short sentence. So, I do my decision.

Sorry for bringing too much troubles to all. But, do I wrong?
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  1. Everyone has a best friend. I also have. My best friend is Lim. She is wearing a pair of spectacles. She has a black and short hair. She also is a librarian.



  2. She is not only is my best friend but she also is my neighbour. She is an intell
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DollAt times, I shall be partaking my joyous with her.

Is there any problems?
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Vincent Teo
DollAt times, I shall be partaking my joyous with her. The word 'partake' is old-fashioned and humorous as my dictionary puts it. You would normally use the word 'joyous' in literature. 'At times' means sometimes whereas 'shall' means 'will' in this case. They don't go along well.

Is there any problems?
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Vincent Teo

  1. Everyone has a best friend. I also have one. (I have one too.) My best friend is Lim. She is wearing a pair of spectacles wears glasses. She has a black and short black hair. She also is a l
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Vincent Teo
Sorry for posting in the passage. I am sure I must get a complain from other members. But, some members encourage me to post it in a context to make me improve instead of a short sentence. So, I do my decision.

Sorry for bringing too much troubles to all. But, do I wrong?



Vincent,

I was the one who advised
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