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Vincent Teo Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

About the tenses 5

Can you give me some comments?



  1. I believe all of you have a best friend. I also have a best friend.



  2. My best friend’s name is Lee. She has short hair, a sweet smile and she wears a nice pair of earrings.



  3. We have similar hobbies such as swimming, dancing, collecting stamps and art and craft. Sometimes, I will go to her house to play.



  4. We also share many dreams and ambition. We study in the same class too. Every day, when I don’t know how to do my homework, I will ask her. She is always happy to help me. Our ambition is to be a doctor when we grow up. So, we will study hard to be good doctor in the country.



  5. I hope Lee will get good results in her exam. I also must study hard and get high marks in my exam.


  

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I believe all of you have best friends. So do I. My best friend is Lee.

— BW2/3

  • I believe all of you have best friends.
  • So do I.
  • My best friend is Lee.
  • She has short hair and wears a nice pair of earrings.
  • Her smile is sweet.
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  1. I believe all of you have best friends. So do I.



  2. My best friend is Lee. She has short hair and wears a nice pair of earrings. Her smile is sweet.



  3. We have similar hobbies such as swimming, dancing, collecting stamps and art and craft. Sometimes, I will go to her house to play (what).



  4. We also share many dreams
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Hi, Vincent Teo. These sentences are very good. I have only a few comments:

3. Usually we says "arts and crafts." Are these sentences written from the point of view of a child? If not, it sounds strange to say "I go to her house to play." ("Will" is not necessary in that sentence.)

4. Every day, when I don’t know how to do my homework,
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