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Can you give me some comments?

I know everyone has a best friend. My best friend is Mi. She is my class monitor. She is also my Church member. She has dark skin, black hair and a pleasant smile. Whenever I met her, she will give me a smile.

Every day after school, we walked to church together. At recess time, we also eat together and play together. We always love to play skipping rope. That is why her hobby is playing skipping rope. She is a good skipper. I like her very much.

We always talk about our class boys and girls. We always talk them very long. Sometimes, we talk about ourselves. She loves to say jokes too. I hope our friendship will never end.

Feebs11 · Accepted Answer

Vincent Teo Can you give me some comments?

I know everyone has a best friend. My best friend is Mi. She is my class monitor. She is also my Church member [meaningless]. She has dark skin, black hair and a pleasant smile. Whenever I met [wrong tense - this is the past tense] her, she will give [wrong tense - this is the future tense]me a smile.

Every day after school, we walked [wrong tense - this is the past tense]to church together. At recess time, we also eat together and play together. We always love ~~to play~~ skipping ~~rope~~. That is why her hobby is ~~playing~~ skipping ~~rope~~. She is a good skipper. I like her very much.

We always talk about our class boys and girls. We always talk them very long. Sometimes, we talk about ourselves. She loves to ~~say~~ [tell] jokes too. I hope our friendship will never end.

You are inconsistent - keep to the present tense. Your last paragraph needs re-writing.
The activity is skipping/to skip.

Vincent Teo · Answer

I try to correct my sentences here.

I know everyone has a best friend. My best friend is Mi. She is my class monitor. She is also a Church member with me. She has dark skin, black hair and a pleasant smile. Whenever I meet her, she will give me a smile.

Every day after school, we walk to church together. At recess time, we also eat together and play together. We always love skipping . That is why her hobby is skipping . She is a good skipper. I like her very much.

We always talk about our class pupils. We always talk everything about them all the time. Sometimes, we talk about ourselves. She loves to tell jokes too. I hope our friendship will never end.

are they correct?

Doll · Answer

know everyone has a best friend. My best friend is Mi. She is my class monitor. She is also a Church member ~~with~~ like me. She has dark skin, black hair and a pleasant smile. Whenever I meet her, she ~~will~~ gives me a smile.

Every day after school, we walk to church together. At recess time, we also eat together and play together. We always love skipping . That is why her hobby is skipping . She is a good skipper. I like her very much.

We always talk about our class ~~pupils~~ mates . We always talk everything about them ~~all the time~~. Sometimes, we talk about ourselves. She loves to tell jokes too. I hope our friendship will never end.

Peaceblinkfriend · Answer

Vincent TeoI try to correct my sentences here. I have tried to correct my writing.

I know everyone has a best friend. My best friend is Mi. She is my class monitor. She is also a Church member with me. She has dark skin, black hair and a pleasant smile. Whenever I meet her, she will give me a smile.
(I know) Everyone has a best friend. My best friend is Mi. She is my class/our class monitor and also a Church member like me. She has dark skin and black hair. She always has that pleasant smile.

Every day after school, we walk to church together. At recess time, we also eat together and play together. We always love skipping . That is why her hobby is skipping . She is a good skipper. I like her very much.
2. Every day after school, we would walk/go to the church together. At recess , we would hang out with each other. We always skip. / We love skipping.(Depending in what you want to say) Skipping is also one of her hobbies. She is a good skipper. I like her very much. ( You might want to refrain yourself from saying this here as this may imply that you like her (just) becuase she is good at skipping.)

We always talk about our class pupils. We always talk everything about them all the time. Sometimes, we talk about ourselves. She loves to tell jokes too. I hope our friendship will never end.

3. We always talk about our classmates. / We always gossip about our classmates. We discuss everything about them form ... to ... . Sometimes, we (even) talk about ourselves. She loves to tell jokes too. I hope our friendship will never end./ I hope (that) we will be friends forever.

are they correct? Is this correct?

You writing is mainly made up of short sentences. It is a bit staccato. However, I think that is fine for the time being.

Best wishes,

PBF

PS Nice work ; )

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