about the tenses 16

Are there any mistakes?



(a) Please guess who is my friend, let’s me tell you all, my best friend is Ho. We are same age, we are 12 years old. Her father works as a policeman, because of her father changing working place, therefore their whole family moved to Taman Ria.



(b) Her father works night shift, because of her father works night shift she seldom talk much with him. Her mother is an author. She will took her mother’s novel to read when she is free.



(c) Her hobby is collecting stamp. Her mother bought a lot of stamps for her when she went to oversea. Her birthday is very special, that was on Christmas Day. She celebrates her birthday every year.



(d) When I was in Year 3, a boy shouted at me because I knocked him. Ho saw it and told the teacher about what happened. The boy ran away quickly. Because of that incident, both of us become best friend.



(e) Now, Ho and I are Year 6. we hope our relationship will stay forever.