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Can you give me some comments? Are they any mistakes?

I have many friends. My best friend is a Chinese girl. Her name is Reachel. She is twelve years old. She is someone who has helped me many times when I needed help. She is good looking, intelligent and helpful. She has a big cheerful face and smiling eyes. She also has long shiny hair.

She lives near my house. We go to the same school together by school bus. We play all kinds of games together in school.

She has helped me to do my assignments and given me useful advice when I was lazy. IF I don’t understand anything in study, she is willing to teach me.

Reachel and I have same hobbies such as swimming, reading and listening to music. Sometimes, we go to the library. We read as many books as we can. We also go swimming every weekend to make our body to be stronger and healthy.

Reachel is a true friend indeed. I can never forget her kindness. I hope we are the best friend forever.

Marius Hancu · Accepted Answer

>Are they any mistakes?

Reachel??

Vincent Teo · Answer

Yes, are they any mistakes?

Feebs11 · Answer

Vincent TeoYes, are they any mistakes?

there

Vincent Teo · Answer

How do I correct the sentences?

Marius Hancu · Answer

Vincent TeoYes, are they any mistakes?

When we're placing something in red/pink, that means that part is incorrect/wrong and you have to study first (including making searches on the Web/Internet for similar patters) and correct it second.

Vincent Teo · Answer

Vincent TeoCan you give me some comments? Are they any mistakes?

I have many friends. My best friend is a Chinese girl. Her name is Reachel. She is twelve years old. She is someone who has helped me many times when I needed help. She is good looking, intelligent and helpful. She has a big cheerful face and smiling eyes. She also has long shiny hair.

She lives near my house. We go to the same school together by school bus. We play all kinds of games together in school.

She has helped me to do my assignments and given me useful advice when I was lazy. IF I don’t understand anything in study, she is willing to teach me.

Reachel and I have same hobbies such as swimming, reading and listening to music. Sometimes, we go to the library. We read as many books as we can. We also go swimming every weekend to make our body to be stronger and healthy.

Reachel is a true friend indeed. I can never forget her kindness. I hope we are the best friend forever.

Sorry, I mean how do I correct the sentence above?

Peaceblinkfriend · Answer

Hi Vincent Teo,

You might want to spent some time on these websites. I think they are particularly suitable for beginners as they cover quite a range of topics and are fairly easy to understand.

http://www.learnenglish.de/ (the grammar part is speacially worth studying - it helped me a lot

)

http://www.english4today.com/englishgrammar/grammar/SUBIDX.CFM

Besides these websites, you could just google "learn English", "Englsih", "ESL/EFL" etc. I am sure you will find heaps of useful websites that will help you learn English more effectively and maybe you will be able to spot your own mistakes as they are sometimes pretty generic.

Can you give me some comments? Are they any mistakes? Again. Are there any mistakes?

I have many friends. My best friend is a Chinese girl. Her name is Reachel Rachel (As mentioned before). She is twelve years old. She is someone who has helped me many times when I needed help. She is someone who always helps me (whenever I need help.) She is good-looking, intelligent and helpful (redundant). She has a cheerful face and smiling eyes (I think you might be able to use this in the figurative sense but then it sounds a bit unnatural to me. I believe this would normally occur in literature.) She also has long shiny hair.

She lives near my house. We go to the same school together by school bus. We go to the same school and we catch the school bus every morning. We play all kinds of games together in at school.

She has helped me to do my assignments and given me useful advice when I was lazy. IF I don’t understand anything in study, she is willing to teach me. If I don't understand something, she is always willing to explain it me. OR She is always willing to explain things that I don't understand.

Reachel and I have same hobbies such as swimming, reading and listening to music. Rachel ( This was mentioned in the second post.) and I have some common hobbies such as swimming, reading and listening to music. Sometimes, we go to the library. We sometimes go the library together. We read as many books as we can. We also go swimming every weekend to make our body to be stronger and healthy. We also go swimming every weekend to keep our body fit and healthy.

Reachel is a true friend indeed. I can never forget her kindness. I will never forget how kind she is (This sounds better to me but I am fairly sure that the way you said it is also valid.). I hope we are the best friend forever. I hope we will be best friends forever. ( I believe you have written this expression in a few of your other posts and those have been corrected .)

Best wishes,

PBF

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