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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
About the letter
Should I write like this way:
Ms Peggy Leong,
The Head of Food Department
Nestle Production Sdn Bhd
Dear Madam,
On behalf of the St Therasa School, we would like to thank you for your generousity for your contribution to sponser towards our school jogathon. Your commitment in helping the school jogathon is sincerely appreciated and moreover, it will benefit our school children and parents.
Attach is the location where the jogathon is held. If you have any enquiries, please contact the person in charge madam Lim (010-78987890)
Your sincerely,
_________
Peter Wong
Headmster
St Theresa School
Ms Peggy Leong,
The Head of Food Department
Nestle Production Sdn Bhd
Dear Madam,
On behalf of the St Therasa School, we would like to thank you for your generousity for your contribution to sponser towards our school jogathon. Your commitment in helping the school jogathon is sincerely appreciated and moreover, it will benefit our school children and parents.
Attach is the location where the jogathon is held. If you have any enquiries, please contact the person in charge madam Lim (010-78987890)
Your sincerely,
_________
Peter Wong
Headmster
St Theresa School
Top answer
Below are some minor changes, but the general text is easily readable. e. "
- Below are some minor changes, but the general text is easily readable.
- e.
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Below are some minor changes, but the general text is easily readable.
spelling changes:
Theresa (possible typing error)
generosity (generous is correct, but generousity is not)
schoolchildren (one word)
attached (i.e. "the location is attached" instead of "the location is attach"
Yours sincerely (versus your sincerely)
headma
spelling changes:
Theresa (possible typing error)
generosity (generous is correct, but generousity is not)
schoolchildren (one word)
attached (i.e. "the location is attached" instead of "the location is attach"
Yours sincerely (versus your sincerely)
headma
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Vincent,
In addition to the other comments:
Should I write itlike this way:
Ms. Peggy Leong, (no comma)
The Head of Food Department (Make sure hier title is correct. Normally we do not use "the", but say Chairman, Food Depa
In addition to the other comments:
Should I write it
Ms. Peggy Leong, (no comma)
The Head of Food Department (Make sure hier title is correct. Normally we do not use "the", but say Chairman, Food Depa
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