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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
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About the kitten that was hurt ...
I try to write in a paragraph, can you help me to correct?
(i) It was a bright sunny day. John saw a kitten who hurt its leg in the drain on his way back home. Its leg was bleeding profusely. He felt sorry and took it home immediately.
(ii) It was a bright Sunday morning. John saw a kitten trapped / was trapped / that was trapped / trap / trapping in the drain. He felt sorry for it and took it home quickly.
(i) It was a bright sunny day. John saw a kitten who hurt its leg in the drain on his way back home. Its leg was bleeding profusely. He felt sorry and took it home immediately.
(ii) It was a bright Sunday morning. John saw a kitten trapped / was trapped / that was trapped / trap / trapping in the drain. He felt sorry for it and took it home quickly.
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Try: (i) It was a bright, sunny day. John, on his way back home, saw a kitten which hurt its leg in a drain. Its leg was bleeding profusely.
- Try: (i) It was a bright, sunny day.
- John, on his way back home, saw a kitten which hurt its leg in a drain.
- Its leg was bleeding profusely.
- He felt sorry and immediately took it home.
- (ii) It was a bright Sunday morning.
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Try:
(i) It was a bright, sunny day. John, on his way back home, saw a kitten which hurt its leg in a drain. Its leg was bleeding profusely. He felt sorry and immediately took it home.
(ii) It was a bright Sunday morning. John saw a kitten trapped in a drain. He felt sorry for it and quickly took it home.
Chris
(i) It was a bright, sunny day. John, on his way back home, saw a kitten which hurt its leg in a drain. Its leg was bleeding profusely. He felt sorry and immediately took it home.
(ii) It was a bright Sunday morning. John saw a kitten trapped in a drain. He felt sorry for it and quickly took it home.
Chris
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