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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

About the incident

What is the best topic for my essay? Please give me some comments, thanks!

Last month, Peter and his friends were playing soccer at the field. There was an overcast that covered the sky. Suddenly, it started to rain, soon it was raining cats and dogs. They made an ignorance about the rain.

They kept playing over in the rain. Peter went under a tree to take some rest. He saw lightning but he did not care about it. Wihout a warning, a bolt of lightning struck Peter while he was walking. Everyone was horrified with that incident. His hands were burnt badly.

He was taken to the hospital by a passer-by. The doctor said he was at the death's door. The doctor managed to save him. Peter said it was an unfortunate day for him and his friends. He was hospitalised for a week in the hospital.
  

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Please help me, Please!
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What is the best topic for my essay? Please give me some comments, thanks!

Last month, Peter and his friends were playing soccer at the field. There was an overcast that covered the sky. Suddenly, it started to rain, soon it was raining cats and dogs. They made an ignorance about the rain.

They kept playing over in the rain. Peter went under a tree to take some rest. He s
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Here are some suggestions:

Last month, Peter and his friends were playing soccer at the field. The sky was overcast. There was an overcast that covered the sky. Suddenly, it started to rain; soon it was raining cats and dogs. They ignored made an ignorance about the rain.

They kept playing over in the rain. Peter went un
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What is the best topic for my essay?

(a) An unfortuante day

(b) A rainy day

(c) An incident happened

or any other suggestions?
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A Rainy Day to Be Remembered Emotion: wink

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