About "The Frightening Dream"

Please give me some comments.

One day, I am spending a day at my friend's place for revision. On that night, when I finished revising, I went home alone. Suddenly, it started raining like cats and dogs. I remembered that I had forgotten to bring the umbrella, so I was forced to go in the abandoned mansion nearby.

When I went in, I felt a gentle breeze coming my way. The door behind me then close by itself. I did not believe in ghosts and spirits, so I went in an explore the mansion. This mansion was full of spider webs as seems like it was abandoned for a thousands years.

Next, I went up stairs because I heard some voices that coming from there. Later, a black just jumped through me. That voice was louder and louder. I went past a door and heard a girl crying furiously, so I went in.

The girl wearing in dark red dress and bleeding with blood from her mouth staring at me. I was frightened and ran around the mansion when she chased after me. Later, I stopped down and rested in a room. I locked the door and hid in the wardrobe, A pair of freezy cold hands came in (the wardrobe) and caught my neck.

I screamed as loud as I could. Afterwards, a voice like my mother was calling me to wake up for breakfast. I noticed that it was a frightened dream. It was really terrible indeed!