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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
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About Peter

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Peter is a Year 5 pupil. He learnt taekwondo since /when he was 8 years old / when he was young. He attends / goes for classes on Saturdays and Sundays. He likes it very much.

He starts a taekwondo lesson for 1 hour and half. During his practice, he wears a (taekwondo)uniform and a green belt. He looks smart and neat.

He needs to warm up before a lesson starts. He also needs 10 minutes to cool down after the practice. He enjoys learning (the) taekwondo. He hopes / aspires to be a (taekwondo) coach / a master in the future.
  

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Introducing Peter Peter is an enthusiastic fifth year student of taekwondo. He was eight years old when he began. Now, he regularly attends classes on Saturdays and Sundays.

  • Introducing Peter Peter is an enthusiastic fifth year student of taekwondo.
  • He was eight years old when he began.
  • Now, he regularly attends classes on Saturdays and Sundays.
  • Peter wears the taekwondo uniform and green belt and always looks smart and neat.
  • Each one and one-half hour session includes a warm up and a ten minute cool down.
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Introducing Peter
Peter is an enthusiastic fifth year student of taekwondo.
He was eight years old when he began. Now, he regularly
attends classes on Saturdays and Sundays.
Peter wears the taekwondo uniform and green belt and always
looks smart and neat. Each one and one-half hour session includes
a warm up and a ten minute cool down.
Peter enjoys taekwondo

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