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Horton Posted 16 years ago
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About past simple? Help me check grammar
2 years ago, I retired from my job of 2 years. The reason that make me retired is I was really stressed out. I had working for 12 hours everyday. In that time, I really needed a vacation. Every once in a while, I thought that I need go to anywhere could make me feel better. Because I retired, I have less money than I used to. With a little money, I can't go anywhere outside VietNam.
My uncles lived in ABC city. When he knew my situation, he told me to visit him. I didn't want to inconvenience him, but he really wants me to fly in. So, I flew to ABC city. I really loved that place. It was so beautiful. There are many places to go, to see, or to play. After 2 weeks, I gradually lost money. So, I thought it was time to take responsibility, I needed return.
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Can you help me to check my grammar, thx?
My uncles lived in ABC city. When he knew my situation, he told me to visit him. I didn't want to inconvenience him, but he really wants me to fly in. So, I flew to ABC city. I really loved that place. It was so beautiful. There are many places to go, to see, or to play. After 2 weeks, I gradually lost money. So, I thought it was time to take responsibility, I needed return.
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Can you help me to check my grammar, thx?
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2 years ago, I retired from a job where I had been working for 2 years. The reason that made me retired is I had really been stressed out. I had been working for 12 hours everyday.
- 2 years ago, I retired from a job where I had been working for 2 years.
- The reason that made me retired is I had really been stressed out.
- I had been working for 12 hours everyday.
- In that time, I really needed a vacation.
- Every once in a while, I thought that I need to go anywhere, where I could feel better.
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2 years ago, I retired from a job where I had been working for 2 years. The reason that made me retired is I had really been stressed out. I had been working for 12 hours everyday. In that time, I really needed a vacation. Every once in a while, I thought that I need to go anywhere, where I could feel better. Because I retired, I have less money than I used to. With(no article) little money, I c
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